(10-25-2009 10:58 PM)Tottel Wrote: Your text would be more fun to read if you'd divide it into paragraphs..
Correction; Not fun. Easier and more reader-friendly.
@Dudeman95: I'll have to agree with Tottel about your Opening Cinematic. There is just to much of the old crap, like Tottel mentioned the typicall "Tell my family... that I loved them..." is getting old and boring.
And while on the Battlefield, in realism, Soldiers do
not communicate with the General.
The story about recreating Dinousars, it's nothing wrong with. Just a bit odd, which is good of you wanna get noticed out there.
Esenthel is a good Engine for pretty much everything, but as others said, it's not Newbie-friendly. For such a project, I would actually recommend CryEngine 2. I've been working with that since the Sandbox was released.
It can do pretty much anything you please, and it sure is relativley newbie-friendly for being so cutting edge.
Anyhow I'd say; Work a bit more on the Concept(Story in this case, or the opening.) also make some Concept Art, so you have something to show before you actually try to 'recruit' members.
When you write the Story or plot for an Opening Cinematic, be creative. Use as good Grammar as you can and use paragraphs and punctations.
Also when there are communication going on do something like;
- "Sir, Delta Squad is getting attacked from their Left Flank! And they're heavily outnumbered!" said Pvt. Dirtbag.
and for 'Special Effects' put them inside some prefixs, like *boom* or whatnot.
Just to make it more reader-friendly.
Anyhow, I wish you the best of luck out there!